Wednesday, 9 March 2016

Memoir of a special place

The bach was usual enough; it had
a beach, the sea, native bush, a wooden 
Tunnel and even a massive tree
I’ve never been up. My Family and I
Did what families do - dawdled alongside
The gorge, biked, lit a fire on the beach and 
Roasted marshmallows, played by the river, 
Slurped up a banana smoothie. 
Doing nothing important.


  1. What a great description of the bach Jacob. I like how you describe us holidaying in a very relaxed way.

  2. You've got an interesting story to tell.

  3. Sounds like it's a fun place for you. We'll do a few more things at Easter for you to add to your memoir. I'm very proud of your descriptive writing.